We have seen a version of this hokku by Issa before:
A “House for Rent” sign
That wasn’t there yesterday.
There is something rather Dickensian about this. People don’t like to move in winter — and particularly not in very cold weather. The sudden appearance of the sign raises unanswered questions, and in hokku, unanswered questions are deliberately never answered. Did the tenant/tenants leave because they could not pay rent or were evicted? Did someone die? There are different possibilities, but the path of hokku is not to tell stories, but rather to create a kind of physical-psychological effect in the reader. The point of the verse lies in the sudden and unexpected emptiness of the house in the falling snow. The emptiness (Yin) of the house is in keeping with the chill and emptiness (Yin) of winter, and both in keeping with the “absence of knowing” — the unanswered question.
In reading this, we should keep in mind the “poverty” of hokku, and from that, know the vacant house is not at all in a fashionable or well-to-do neighborhood, which makes it all the more significant.
2 thoughts on “WINTER VACANCY”
Love the possibilities in this.
Like it. David’s comment as well as the hokku.