SOLITUDE

Here is a slight variation on a hokku by Issa:

(Winter)

Solitude;
The frost on the window
Only deepens it.

There is something about the icy cold of winter that really does increase the sense of aloneness.  This verse gives us the feeling of (spiritual) poverty that is so important to hokku, and the verse is all the more striking because of its stark simplicity — very much in keeping with the nature of winter cold.

David

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2 Responses to SOLITUDE

  1. Ashley says:

    This hokku also conveys a notion that the reader is inside, enclosed, cut off, and the cold is outside.

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