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HOKKU SEASON WORDS: OLD AND NEW

A noteworthy difference between hokku as it was practiced in old Japan and hokku as it is practiced today in English is the method of dealing with season. The seasons are essential to hokku, one of its defining characteristics.  Every … Continue reading

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WOLVES HOWLING: HARMONY OF CONTRAST

Per Jōsō: Lupos ululante Omnes insimul; Le vespere nivee. By Jōsō: Wolves howling All together; The snowy evening. In hokku habemus harmonia de similaritate, ma anque harmonia de contrasto.  Iste verso per Jōsō nobis mostra le harmonia de contrasto.  Como? In hokku … Continue reading

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LE MATINO NIVEE DE CHIYO-NI / THE SNOWY MORNING OF CHIYO-NI

Un de le hokku hibernales le plus bones es iste, de Chiyo-ni: In campo e monte Nihil mova; Le matino nivee. Iste verso nobis mostra le character Yin del hiberno (movimento es Yang, immobilitate es Yin). Videmus anque le Yin … Continue reading

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GATHERED COOLNESS: THE AUTUMN MOON

  A very old autumn hokku by Teishitsu (c. 1609-1673): A solid lump Of coolness; The midnight moon. In English today we would likely say, A solid ball Of coolness; The midnight moon. You will recall that the sun is … Continue reading

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HOKKU ROOTS: BAI JUYI’S SIXTY-SIX

Today I will talk briefly about a poem by the Chinese writer Bai Juyi (772 -846, also written as Po Chu-yi). You may recall from previous discussions of Chinese poetry here that most Chinese poems  are written in couplets (pairs … Continue reading

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MELTING SNOW

As regular readers here know, I treat many of the verses of Shiki as hokku because they are hokku in form and content, in spite of his use of the revisionist term “haiku” for what he wrote. Knowing that, we are … Continue reading

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LINGERING SNOW: TAIGI’S BAMBOOS

Somewhat unusual in its scope of scale and distance, this verse by Taigi is reminiscent of Chinese poetry in its feeling of vastness: it gives one the sense of hiking up into cold, silent and remote hills: Far from any … Continue reading

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THE ESSENTIAL IMPORTANCE OF YIN AND YANG IN HOKKU

I often talk about Yin and Yang in hokku.  In fact I talk about them so much that another name for the kind of hokku I teach might be “Yin-Yang” hokku.  That is how important it is — so important … Continue reading

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BASIC HOKKU PRINCIPLES: HARMONY OF SIMILARITY

THIS IS A BILINGUAL POSTING IN ENGLISH AND INTERLINGUA ISTE ES UN ARTICULO BILINGUE IN INTERLINGUA E IN ANGLESE Il ha un hokku interessante del comenciamento de autumno: Le autumno comencia; Depost un banio, Le lassitude.  Iste nos monstra harmonia … Continue reading

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JOHN KEATS AND HOKKU?

Do you remember the key to writing and understanding hokku? THE KEY TO UNDERSTANDING HOKKU IS TO REALIZE THAT WHATEVER MANIFESTS THE NATURE OF THE SEASON IS APPROPRIATE TO THAT SEASON, AND WHAT DOES NOT MANIFEST THE NATURE OF THE … Continue reading

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THROUGH THE BARLEY

Mokudō wrote a very simple yet very effective spring hokku: Harukaze ya   mugi no naka yuku   mizu no oto Spring wind ya barley ‘s center goes water ‘s sound I give the Japanese transliteration only to show how … Continue reading

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GROWING YANG IN ONITSURA

I have discussed this early spring hokku by Onitsura previously, but I would like to deepen what was already said a bit: Dawn;On the tip of the barley leaf,Spring frost. It is obvious that this is an early spring hokku … Continue reading

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SPRING BEGINS

It may seem odd to some readers that I have begun to write of Spring, but where I live that is what is happening. Spring begins with the very weakest of Yang energies that melt snow and ice and sprout … Continue reading

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CONTEMPLATIVE HOKKU IN WINTER

Contemplative hokku are those which best exemplify the poverty, simplicity, and selflessness that are the chief virtues of hokku.  And these, along with the appreciation of the inherent poetry in a simple thing-event, set in the context of the seasons … Continue reading

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SNOW AND THE POETRY OF NO POETRY

One of the most beautiful Christmas carols is “In the Bleak Midwinter,” with words by Christina Rossetti, set to wonderfully appropriate music by Gustav Holst.  Most of the words have specific religious content and are of little interest to me … Continue reading

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COLD RAIN

I hope many of you paid close attention to the recent articles here about the hokku calendar.  Here is where we are now as we move toward autumn’s end: Autumn: Begins with Lammas (Harvest Home — Lughnasa), August 1.  1st … Continue reading

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THE IMPORTANCE OF SEASON IN HOKKU

Here I have strung together some information on season in hokku, as well as a bit on the role of Yin and Yang: The outer form of hokku is quickly described; the content of hokku takes more time, because it … Continue reading

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FALLING WILLOW LEAVES

People seem to prefer reading this site, so I am shelving the alternate Hokku Inn site for now, and will move the postings from that site here, so they will still be accessible.  Here is the first of those: In … Continue reading

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A BIT ABOUT MOONS

I recently posted information about the hokku calendar.  If nothing else from it sticks in your mind, remember these two things: 1.  Autumn /fall and winter are the two yin seasons; spring and summer are the two yang seasons.  In … Continue reading

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AUTUMN SCARECROWS

Autumn has begun. Autumn is the declining of the life energies in Nature.  We see it in the withering of grasses and plants, in the yellowing and coloring and, eventually, the falling of the leaves.  In America our “native” name … Continue reading

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SEEN IN THE SHALLOWS

Onitsura wrote this summer hokku: Evening; The bellies of trout seen In the shallows. This is a “standard” hokku, meaning it has setting, subject, and action.  The setting is the evening; the subject is the bellies of the trout; the … Continue reading

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THE CLEAR WATER

The stonemason Cools his chisel in it – The clear water. Buson While working stone, the metal chisel of the stonemason becomes too hot to hold — from the heat of the day and from the friction of repeated blows … Continue reading

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YIN-YANG HOKKU

In our practice of hokku, we must beware of using the entire body of existing old hokku and its related literature as a fundamentalist uses the Bible.  By this I mean that we should not say, for example, “Jōsō did … Continue reading

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WHITE RAIN

Jōsō wrote a summer hokku: In the white rain, Ants are running Down the bamboos That is a very literal translation.  In English we would not be likely to say “white rain.”  Instead we would probably say, In the clear … Continue reading

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THE SEASONS OF HOKKU

When we talk about season in hokku, what do we mean exactly? Well, everyone knows that in temperate climates we traditionally have four seasons — spring, summer, autumn, and winter.  Every hokku we write belongs to one of these seasons, … Continue reading

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THE INTERACTIONS OF YIN AND YANG

Kitō wrote: A summer shower; The exhausted horse Comes back to life. I always see the muscles of the fatigued horse begin twitching with life shortly after the first drops of cool rain strike it. We feel the sudden energy … Continue reading

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THE RAIN IS RAINING ALL AROUND

The fundamental principle of hokku is that it is about Nature and the place of humans as a part of, not apart from, Nature — set in the context of the seasons.  Here is a hokku by Shōha emphasizing the … Continue reading

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HOKKU AND THE “TEN THOUSAND THINGS”

In the last posting we reviewed Yin and Yang in hokku, and introduced the two kinds of contrast.  This latter is important in itself, so I shall say more about it. Hokku may exhibit either: 1.  Harmony of contrast or … Continue reading

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THE HOKKU OF SUMMER

All hokku are seasonal hokku, being written and marked (as practiced today) with one of the four seasons.  That comes from hokku having originated in a temperate climate.  In other climates this may vary to a summer season, a rainy … Continue reading

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ON THE OLD DOOR

I repeatedly remind readers that hokku is very simple.  Here is a good example — a verse by Shōha: Furuki to ni    kage utsuriyuku   tsubame kana Old  door on   shadow changing swallow kana In essence, this is … Continue reading

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METAPHOR AND INTERNAL REFLECTION

It is interesting to see how modern haiku enthusiasts wiggle and squirm to try to evade the simple fact that metaphor is not a part of good hokku, but instead is a concept borrowed by haiku commentators from Western poetry … Continue reading

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FLICKERING SHADOWS

Buson, who wrote some rather artifical and contrived hokku, also managed to write one of the simplest and most effective of spring hokku: Shoku no hi wo   shoku ni utsusu ya   haru no yū light   ‘s  flame … Continue reading

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SPRING AND NEW BEGINNINGS

In old hokku, spring began with the Lunar New Year, which came on varying dates between the end of January and the middle of February.  This year, for example, the Lunar New Year will happen on February 14th. In modern … Continue reading

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WINTER LIGHT

Michihiko, who lived in the time of Issa, wrote: Kare-ashi ya             yuki no chirakutsuku   kaze no ato Withered-reeds ya snow’s  flitting              wind ‘s after Withered reeds; The … Continue reading

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PEOPLE’S VOICES

Here is my periodic disclaimer: I do not teach modern haiku, which, as it exists today, has virtually nothing to do with the old hokku written by Bashō, Onitsura, Gyōdai, Taigi, and all the others who wrote up until the … Continue reading

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SADNESS, OBJECTIVELY

Yesterday we discussed emotion in hokku, and how it is better not to present it openly but rather indirectly, through the objective elements of a hokku. There are certain old hokku, however, where direct mention of an emotion is found, … Continue reading

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DECEMBER AND YULETIDE

December will soon begin, and with it comes the holiday season. How does one deal with holidays in hokku?  The same way one deals with a season.  A holiday verse is like a miniature seasonal verse — in other words, … Continue reading

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THE HOKKU OF WINTER

Winter is at the door.  In some places it has already come.  So it is time to begin considering what a winter hokku should be. Remember the Yin and Yang of the seasons, the interplay of the two universal forces. … Continue reading

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WHAT COMES FROM THE READER

There are some hokku difficult for young people to understand — difficult not because of complexity, but because one must go through certain experiences to fully appreciate them.  One of the most obvious of these is Buson’s verse: Chichi haha … Continue reading

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WHITE DEW

Having spent enough time talking about why hokku is not the same as haiku (and why haiku is not hokku), let’s move back to the real subject — old hokku. Buson wrote this autumn hokku: White dew – A drop … Continue reading

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HARMONY OF SIMILARITY, HARMONY OF DIFFERENCE

Yesterday I discussed the importance of season in hokku — how hokku is the poetry of the seasons, and how the subjects we choose for our verses should reflect the character of the season in which we are writing in … Continue reading

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THE SEASONAL KEY TO HOKKU

It is very easy to superficially notice, or to unthinkingly gloss over, the critical importance of season in hokku.  It is not going too far to say that hokku is the verse of the seasons — that the REAL subject … Continue reading

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HOKKU IN AUTUMN

In hokku it is essential to write in harmony with the season.  The most important quality of autumn is transience — the fact that everything changes, all is impermanent, nothing stays.  Autumn is transience. In autumn hokku, we experience and … Continue reading

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PREPARING TO LEARN HOKKU

Only a single day remains before August ends and September begins.  The Summer months — June, July and August — give way to the Autumn months — September, October and November. Through hokku we are taken away from the excessive … Continue reading

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AUTUMN BEGINS

In some parts of the country summer lingers.  In others autumn has already come.  Here is a hokku by Taigi, which expresses the transition from one to the other: Autumn begins: The summer shower becomes A night of rain. Taigi … Continue reading

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ENTERING AUTUMN

Summer is ending, autumn is beginning. I have already mentioned the transitional verse by Kyoroku that leads us into the season: August;First on the ears of millet –The autumn wind. There is a related hokku by Chora: It blew first … Continue reading

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BEGINNING TO LEARN CONTENT IN HOKKU

The outer form of hokku is quickly described; the content of hokku takes more time, because it has so many aspects. First, the basics. The content of hokku is always Nature and the place of humans within and as a … Continue reading

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THE WHEEL OF THE YEAR

In her bittersweet children’s book Tuck Everlasting, Natalie Babbitt writes: “The first week of August hangs at the very top of summer, the top of the live-long year, like the highest seat of a Ferris wheel when it pauses in … Continue reading

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