Monthly Archives: March 2012

TAO YUAN-MING’S SPRING

R. H. Blyth called this work by Tao Qian (Tao Yuan-ming, c. 365-427) and translated by Arthur Waley “the best translation… of the best poem in the world.” Swiftly the years, beyond recall, Solemn the stillness of this fair morning. … Continue reading

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HOKKU ROOTS: BAI JUYI’S SIXTY-SIX

Today I will talk briefly about a poem by the Chinese writer Bai Juyi (772 -846, also written as Po Chu-yi). You may recall from previous discussions of Chinese poetry here that most Chinese poems  are written in couplets (pairs … Continue reading

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MELTING SNOW

As regular readers here know, I treat many of the verses of Shiki as hokku because they are hokku in form and content, in spite of his use of the revisionist term “haiku” for what he wrote. Knowing that, we are … Continue reading

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LINGERING SNOW: TAIGI’S BAMBOOS

Somewhat unusual in its scope of scale and distance, this verse by Taigi is reminiscent of Chinese poetry in its feeling of vastness: it gives one the sense of hiking up into cold, silent and remote hills: Far from any … Continue reading

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THE ESSENTIAL IMPORTANCE OF YIN AND YANG IN HOKKU

I often talk about Yin and Yang in hokku.  In fact I talk about them so much that another name for the kind of hokku I teach might be “Yin-Yang” hokku.  That is how important it is — so important … Continue reading

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THE BASICS OF HOKKU AESTHETICS

In a previous posting, you will recall, I said that one may have a verse in the outward form of a hokku, with everything in it correct, and still not have a hokku.  That is because to be a real … Continue reading

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THE SPRING HOKKU CALENDAR

Because the practice of hokku is so intimately connected with the seasons, I like to regularly remind readers where we are in the “old” hokku calendar in its traditional Western version, the Wheel of the Year, which very closely approximates … Continue reading

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“PARTING” HOKKU AND THE LONG POETIC TRADITION

It used to be common — and still is, to some extent — for people in the modern haiku movement to see Masaoka Shiki (1867-1902) as a “rebel” of the end of the 19th century.  But actually, Shiki was in … Continue reading

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A BASIC REVIEW OF THE HOKKU FORM IN ENGLISH

  An English-language hokku is a verse of three lines, the middle line often — but not always — visually longer than the others. Chiy0-ni wrote a very effective spring hokku: Ebb tide; Everything picked up Is moving. Notice that: … Continue reading

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SPARROWS, VERANDAS, AND TWO QUITE DIFFERENT VIEWS

I recently mentioned some criticisms of R. H. Blyth that appear on a site called “Simply Haiku.”  One can dismiss them (as I did — with quotes from Blyth to refute those I quoted) as simply wholesale misrepresentation and misunderstanding. … Continue reading

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THE VALIDITY OF HOKKU

Yesterday I discussed a kind of “fundamentalism” one finds among those who talk about hokku and haiku, and I wrote, essentially, that it does not matter to me (except historically) what any of the old hokku writers had to say … Continue reading

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AVOIDING HOKKU AND HAIKU AS “RELIGIOUS” FUNDAMENTALISM

Every now and then, I like to clarify my approach to the hokku — that is, to teaching the writing of new hokku — for readers who may be novices here. As many of you know, I have been teaching … Continue reading

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STAR CHILDREN

Consider the words of cosmologist Lawrence M. Krauss in his fascinating book A Universe from Nothing (Free Press, 2012): “One of the most poetic facts I know about the universe is that essentially every atom in your body was once inside … Continue reading

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DROPPING CAMELLIAS AND “EXPLANDED” TRANSLATIONS

I wrote yesterday of R. H. Blyth and his method of translating hokku.  He wrote six volumes of such translations, nearly all of which had to do with hokku, though he used the terminology of the Japan of his day … Continue reading

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HYAKUCHI: VANISHING COWS AND A SNEEZE

I have written before about the telegraphic brevity of old hokku, which often comes as a surprise to those who are accustomed to seeing it in English translations or to seeing modern English-language hokku. Here, for example, is R. H. … Continue reading

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WILD CHERRIES, WATER WHEELS, AND (shudder!) WIKIPEDIA

It is unfortunate that when Reginald H. Blyth wrote his series of volumes extolling and explaining what were, for the most part, verses of hokku, he made the mistake of using the revisionist term then popular in the Japan of … Continue reading

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HARMONY OF CONTRAST: PLUM BLOSSOMS AND CHARCOAL DUST

Plum blossoms; They scatter on an empty sack Of charcoal.                   That is a rewriting of a hokku by Yayū. It is of course a spring hokku. There are, as I have … Continue reading

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LINGERING COLD: BUSON’S PLUM BLOSSOMS

Buson wrote: In nooks and corners The cold lingers; Plum blossoms This hokku shows us the change from the extreme yin of winter to the growing yang of spring.  Even though the plum trees are blooming, in the shadows and … Continue reading

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